This Girl

Together forever in this idealistic cage,
is it me & you,
or just another phase?

Left in question about what you are,
right in the position I had you from the start.
I noticed what you were from the moment I saw you,
a driven, exotic, hard working woman,
the kind I'd want not to be torn apart.

But such a thought lead me to no worry,
because I know you need me as much as I need you,
so take my hand and continue to lure me.
Original Draft

2 thoughts on “This Girl

  1. Saving drafts gives ourselves insights and also to the reader. I understand the re-working. In the few times I write poetry I focus on syllabic count, that is, every line of the poem has the same number of beats. Lottaa work…


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